All Whites Vs Slovakia

The game, All Whites vs Slovakia who will win. The All Whites had the ball. But Slovikia tackled a player so they got the ball right now .He kicked it to the striker will he score .YES!!! Slovakia have scored the All Whites are losing by 1 goal .If they score 1 goal .That will be their 1st goal and It will be a draw .” Half time said the referee”

The players are getting ready for the second half. “The coach said have a good drink of water and score a goal quickly”.

The All Whites havn’t scored a goal yet. It has been 45 minutes. But there are 3 minutes stop page time. Two minutes already have gone . One minute to go . The All Whites are trying to get a goal . The players are running up they are nearly there will they score ? Smeltz did a fake pass then he hit it, it was a good pass . will Reid head it in ? YES!!! REID SCORED A GOAL . YES IT IS A DRAW . WE ARE NOT OUT OF THE TOURNAMENT.

By Ushil

16/6/10

Ushil, you have used lots a questions so you will need question marks.

Names are proper nouns so should start with a capital letter.

You need to read your work out aloud to check for sense and your phrasing - buddy edit.