SHARK IN MY TOILET!
Sharks belong in the ocean not the toilet.....
“Ouch!” I heard my grandad shout one day. “do not go into the toilet,” he panted
“ why not,” I ask back.
“Theres a shark in there,”.
“grandads gone bonkers,” I thought to myself.
A little while later I needed to go toilet.I sat down and ..... ouch something bit me.I sprung to my feet,spun around and there it was sitting in the toilet..... a white tipped reef shark.
I tried a lot of different ways to get it out.I tried fishing it out I tried using horse meat I tried a giant fishing net I tried flushing it down it just flooded the bathroom
Suddenly I had an idea I sprinted down the stairs picked up the phone called the aquarium.They came and took it away forever.Problem solved.
Written by Noah .
Nice story Noah! I like the way the main character thinks the grandad is going crazy! Though there was a few punctuation errors mostly in the first paragraph.
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