Monday, September 17, 2012

Adam's awesome story, Sharks belong in the ocean not,... Jim's bathtub.



Sharks belong in ocean not,...
Jim’s bathtub.  
Jim is 94 years old and is partly blind
and forget full. He just loooovesssss fish so one day Jim went to a strange looking pet store to buy a fish. The strange shop keeper gave him a rather odd looking big fish.


 When Jim arrived home he put the strange big fish in his sink. He fed his pet fish everyday and notices his fish has really big sharp teeth  Jim is so old and partly blind he does not notice that his pet fish is actually a shark!! 


Jim’s pet shark has gotten so big it has to be put in his bathtub. As i said earlier Jim has bad memory so he had forgotten the shark was in the bathtub and also he is partly blind so he jumped in his bathtub and ... GULP! 
Jim’s shark swallows Jim whole!

 Luckily the live bait sees Jim get swallowed so he jumps into the sharks mouth and grabs its tonsils and swings on them until the shark vomits... blahhhhh!! Jim and the live bait safely slides out covered in fishy spew.

Jim and the live bait become best friends and live a happy life.

By Adam- 11

1 comment:

  1. This is the best story ever! it should be published you would make millions.
    -Adam.

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